Night after night shadows go lengthy
Thoughts get crowded and air gets misty
Filling the mind and emptying the soul
I tire each time and loose control
Question I ask and answer I seek
But nothing gonna touch you makes me go freak
I press my desire and knock at your door
When get no reply I do it more
I am persistent and so is you
Nothing ever changed the things are always so
Gloomy dark buidings lay at my vision
And consistently I move down this division
I am going and you take your luck
I am leaving only to come back
The day is locked and my hands shiver
It is still dark but my light flitters!!
2 comments:
after reading d one above this, tis one luks a bit gloomy..
bt considering d one above came after this one, its a good change...
u remind me of an old pain....
common, lil known, lying jst around d corner....
:)
Hi Wandering Soul, I am sorry if I reminded you of some pain.........but though the poem was gloomy and dark it showed one thing te person in the poem was full of hope, and that is what is important in liiiiife never ever to give away hope.............
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